Monday, 28 February 2011

Hannah.


This a test piece I'm doing for a friend for her book. Critique is welcome!

5 comments:

L ROSSI said...

This looks lovely! I'm liking the cut-out'ness of it :)
L

Melissa said...

I love it. I got the movement and the importance of the hat!

"TORI CAT" said...

Looking nice yaz!!! Great colours and the cut out stylie works lovely too!!
Personally, the only crit i would have is to maybe make the girl's hair or her clothes look as if they are being blown in the wind... to to emphasize the wind blowing her hat off her head.
Its not a biggie tho... i really like how the movement of the hat and the birds flying help you read the image from left to right!
Look forward to seeing what happens next...!! :)

Hope your keeping well?
Lots of love.xx

Yaz said...

Thanks for the comments, peeps I really appreciate them :)

The image has changed a bit now and once the others are finished I'll post them up! x

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